I’m studying and need help with a English question to help me learn.
Paper just needs to be revised to include the following suggestions:
Great job pulling together so much substantial information in such a short time. As a reader, I am not certain about the organization and sequence of ideas in this draft. I see several subsections but don’t know why I’m reading about the issues in each subsection or how they build on and follow and relate to one another. It’s almost like you have different essays kind of smashed together, but they need to flow into and out of each other. Consider how you can develop what might be like “introductory” and “concluding” paragraphs for each section. In these paragraphs, you should preview the information covered in the section and work to transition from the previous section. Hope this makes sense.
1st paragraph highlighted sentence doesn’t make sense. End of 1st paragraph under the title “Medicare negotiating drug prices” (highlighted) isn’t a complete sentence. Page 3 – the first complete paragraph (Highlighted) needs revision
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