I need help my homework

I’m working on a English question and need guidance to help me study.

Directions:

Step 1: First, please carefully review your Essay 2 prompt:

Links to an external site.Step 2: By Friday at 11:59 pm, submit your rough draft of Essay 1.

You can copy paste it into the discussion board or (preferably) attach it as a file. You will click “Reply” and attach your draft in a similar way as you have done for discussions or annotation in the past.

Step 3: Check back in on Saturday morning. I will have matched you up with a partner (I will send out a partner list as an announcement). Once you see who your partner is, find his or her post, download the rough draft, and make as many helpful comments and suggestions on it as you can. You can use the insert comment function on word, or you can simply write your comments in red.

Step 4: Once you are done commenting, go onto the next page (add a new page to the writer’s essay) and answer the following questions:

1. Does the writer begin with a story? Is it an effective story? What details could the writer add to it?
2. Does the writer have a clear thesis that makes some kind of argument about cultural borders and the way they help shape our identities?
3. Does the writer have three main claims or points?
4. Is each of the main claim or point supported by either personal experiences and/or cited sources (from class or from the writer’s own research)? Is the support effective/convincing? Are there places where better support is needed?
5. Does the writer have a conclude the script in a way that leaves you thinking/gives you a sense of finality?
6. What would you say are the talk’s greatest strengths? What did the writer do particularly well?
7. What should the writer focus on most as they revise the the script? What can be most improved?