paper edition of the research paper

I’m trying to study for my Philosophy course and I need some help to understand this question.

I have attached

initial instructions (research paper)

the research paper

review and comments

Unfortunately, your paper did not pass the “Turnitin Originality” test. It contains 61 % of text borrowed from sources without giving due credit. I believe that you are a gifted student with a strong potential. I give you an opportunity to re-write this paper and re-submit it before April 30. This is a serious violation of the WAU plagiarism policy. I have attached the pdf with the Turnitin report to this message.”

YOUR GRADE COMPOSITION FOR THIS PAPER IS AS FOLLOWS:

1. Well-defined thesis – 0/10

2. Logic and development of the argument – 0/10

3. Originality of ideas -0/10

4. Serious consideration of counter-arguments – 0/10

5. Well-informed (incorporates relevant readings & conceptual distinctions) – 0/10

6. Reflects solid understanding of readings – 0/10

7. Writing Style (clarity, flow, transitions, etc.) – 0/10

8. Grammar, paragraph & sentence structure – 0/10

TOTAL POINTS: 0/80

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