English as second language Research Paper “How is the American value of competition reflected in American business practices?

I’m studying for my English class and don’t understand how to answer this. Can you help me study?

HELP ME TO IMPROVE MY ENGLISH RESEARCH PAPER AND FINISH THE REST

Please follow the PPT Outline to help me finish the rest of the paper (Especially the data part)

I will provide my outline to you. IT IS VERY IMPORTANT TO FOLLOW THE OUTLINE!!!!

I already finish some of the paper, please make the papar read nice and explain my data form my PPT .

• Your paper must be typed and double spaced.
• The font of the paper should be “Times New Roman”.
• The size of the type must be 12 point, no larger.
• The margins should be 1 inch on the top, bottom, and sides of your paper.
• MLA Citation rules for in-text and Works Cited page must be followed.
• All drafts must be submitted to Turn-it-in on BB.
• Your final draft of the paper must be 10 pages long (11 pages if your first paper was only 4 pages).This is full pages of writing, not including the Works Cited page.
• If you do not follow academic honesty rules, you will get a 0 and/or reported to the Binghamton University academic honesty committee.

Here is my pervious outline for my paper, I change some in PPT and my paper. Plz follow the ppt outline and research data when you change my paper, and FOLLOW THE OUTLINE STRUCTURE !!!

Outline for the Library and Web Research Paper:

“How is the American value of competition reflected in American business practices?”

I. Introduction

a. Attention getter: Quotation

“World trade means competition from anywhere; advancing technology encourages cross-industry competition. Consequently, strategic planning must consider who our future competitors will be, not only who is here today.” – Eric Allison

b. Issue: The tech giants pose unique challenges, but they also represent just one piece of a broader story: a troubling phenomenon of too little competition throughout the U.S. economy.

c. Research Question: “How is the American value of competition reflected in American business practices?”

d. Thesis Statement: value of competition in American business is reflected by free enterprise, innovate and upgrade, and government police.

II. Findings

a. Free enterprise

1. free enterprise leads to progress and produces success

2. competition brings out the best in people

3. government is not involved

b. The nation’s competitiveness depends on the capacity of its industry to innovate and upgrade.

1. companies can spur the invention of new or better products

2. drive economic growth and increases standards of living

3. identify consumers’ needs

c. government police

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III. Conclusion

a. Thesis restatement:

b. Review findings + Opinion, prediction or solution to problem

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c. Memorable take away/ hopeful vision for future

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The introduction paragraph the professor said that :

Also, remember that the Introductory paragraph needs to have a hook, background info of the topic, your research question, your thesis statement (one sentence that tells the 3 main answers to the question). So the article should be like this form.

Also, each paragraph need has a TOPIC SENTENCE and CONCLUSION SENTENCE, look at my paper and you will understand.

Example outline and conclution in the following “Research paper Conclusion example” document

My outline —- “PPT ELI”, My paper —– “Paper 2”,

My ideas and researchs might not very good, you can change little bit of my ideas but do not change the most of outline! You can expand my ideas and find the research to prove it. Find the appropriate data to support my ideas!!! Some of the datas I was wrting in PPT, Plz explain them in my paper.

Please don’t write the paper in very deep and hard way!! It is a ESL paper !!

IF YOU HAVE ANY QUESTION, TALK TO MY ASAP!!! I WILL REPLY YOU immediately !! IF YOU ARE NOT SURE OF THE FORM OF PAPER. I CAN SEE THE SAMPLE FOR YOUR FIRST IDEAS WRITING AND GIVE YOU THE FEEDBACK.

10 PAGES WITHOUT CITATION