Critique 3 fiction stories

I’m trying to learn for my Art & Design class and I’m stuck. Can you help?

I want you to critique 3 fiction stories, attached file has the three fiction stories 1-2 paragraph for each critique. I want them to be detailed and positive feedback.

Things to Consider in Fiction

• Point of View
• • First person, second person, third person
  • Omniscient, limited omniscient, objective
• Distance between the author/reader and the author/character
• Character
• • Character as image, voice, action, thought
  • Character as presented by the author (authorial interpretation)
  • Character as conflict
• Setting
• • Setting as the world, a camera, mood and symbol, action
• Story
• • Story as a journey, a power struggle, connection and disconnection
• Plot, Summary, Scene, Backstory, Flashback, Text, Subtext

Post Critique for 3 Classmates

1. • Answer the questions: “What are the story’s strengths?” and “What would help improve the story?”
   • Be thoughtful, considerate, and constructive in your comments. Start with the positive comments first.
   • Provide detailed feedback using the concepts and terms (eg character, point of view, plot) discussed in the course.
   • Explain why the writing as a whole works for what it is trying to do, why it doesn’t, or why some elements of it work while others don’t.
   • Don’t simply say, “I like this” or “I don’t like this.”

Critiques

Your critique must be thoughtful, considerate, and constructive. I will be reading over them checking to see that they are thoughtful and constructive with the intent of improving the piece of writing. Instead of just saying, “I like this” or “I don’t like this,” explain why the writing as a whole works for what it is trying to do or why it doesn’t, or why some elements of it work while others don’t. See “Workshop Rules” for guidelines on returning these critiques.