Research Paper on “Araby” By James Joyce
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Just Editing based on the feedback I was given –Open the assignment to see my annotations/marks throughout –If you don’t understand my annotation/mark, please email me! –Do not put short story titles in italics–just quotation marks –You have a tendency to “overwrite” some of your sentences, which can cause confusion. I’ve marked a number of places where you need to revise. Revise by 1) Reading the sentence out loud–does it make logical sense? Is everything in it clear? 2) Making shorter, simpler, clearer sentences. Begin with clear nouns, and make sure that the nouns can “do” the verbs in your sentences. 3) Limit the number of subjects and predicate verbs in your sentences. 4) Limit the number of “which” clauses you use—there are a few times in this essay you use a “which” clause in a way that leads to confusion. –Submit your paper to Smarthinking and ask for help with sentence structure and punctuation
